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Could you read the e-mail below? We are very happy to hear the news that Junyoung has been accepted to ISKL. Obviously, we'd love to send our child, Junyoung, to ISKL. In accordance with your request, Junyoung's father will be glad to send you a letter of employment from his company. It is expected to send you next week at the latest. Next, I'd like you to issue a formal acceptance/confirmation letter for us. We have to submit his formal acceptance letter from ISKL to his current elementary school in order to give up his study in Korea properly. I hope that I could get this acceptance letter before leaving for Malaysia. Lastly, could you let me know where can my son take the school bus near my condo? I studied the school bus information in the ISKL web-site, but unfortunately I couldn't find the school bus route in detail. I am afraid that the pick-up and drop-off point won't be close to my condo. I'd appreciate it if you'd provide me with the information about the above questions.

Hi there, Kaylee! I checked the e-mail that you wrote below. Kindly check my corrections here. Congratulations to your son! Enjoy your weekend! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Could you read the e-mail below?>> CORRECT!We are very happy to hear the news that Junyoung has been accepted to ISKL. >> CORRECT!Obviously, we\'d love to send our child, Junyoung, to ISKL. >> CORRECT!In accordance with your request, Junyoung\'s father will be glad to send you a letter of employment from his company. >> In accordance with your request, Junyoung\'s father will gladly send you a letter of employment from his company.It is expected to send you next week at the latest.>> He will send it to you by next week. OR: >> You can expect it by next week.Next, I\'d like you to issue a formal acceptance/confirmation letter for us. >> First, I would like to take this opportunity to ask your good office to send us a formal acceptance letter.We have to submit his formal acceptance letter from ISKL to his current elementary school in order to give up his study in Korea properly. >> We have to submit his formal acceptance letter from ISKL to his current elementary school in order to inform them that he is permanently giving up his studies in Korea. I hope that I could get this acceptance letter before leaving for Malaysia.>> I hope to receive this acceptance letter before leaving for Malaysia.Lastly, could you let me know where can my son take the school bus near my condo? >> Second, could you let me know where can my son take the school bus near my condo? I studied the school bus information in the ISKL web-site, but unfortunately I couldn\'t find the school bus route in detail. >> I checked the school bus information in the ISKL website, unfortunately, I couldn\'t find the detailed school bus route. I am afraid that the pick-up and drop-off point won\'t be close to my condo. >> CORRECT!I\'d appreciate it if you\'d provide me with the information about the above questions. >> I\'d appreciate it if you could provide me with the information that I need. OR:>> I\'d appreciate it if you could provide me with the answers to my inquiries.