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If I had only 24 hours to live, first of all, I would neatly sort out all my belongings. Next, I am going to take a bath for a long time, and I'd like to titivate myself with my former military uniform. This would be the first part to prepare for my death.
Secondly, it is time for repentance. It's time to meet my God personally, trying to contact the Lord through my spirit. Then, I would sincerely pray to God, " Please forgive all my sins." I try to enumerate every single error and sin.
Thirdly, I would make my will by hand to my wife, my son, my relatives, and so on. i would say about what I wanted to say to them.
Fourthly, I would make a call to anyone who I hated before or anyone hurt by my words, letters and acts. And, I would ardently beg their forgiveness.
Lastly, I would invite my church members including the pastor over my house, and I'd like to participate in the last worship service in my life at home. I really wish to die singing a gospel and a hymn with my family.
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This is a very emotional question TT
I am so sorry, I myself became emotional reading this.
Anyway, enjoy your day and see you on Monday, Sir!
If I had only 24 hours to live, first of all, I would neatly sort out all my belongings.
>>CORRECT!
Next, I am going to take a bath for a long time, and I\'d like to titivate myself with my former military uniform.
>>CORRECT!
This would be the first part to prepare for my death.
>>CORRECT!Secondly, it is time for repentance.
>>CORECT!
It\'s time to meet my God personally, trying to contact the Lord through my spirit.
>>CORRECT!
Then, I would sincerely pray to God, \" Please forgive all my sins.\"
>>CORRECT!
I try to enumerate every single error and sin.
>>CORRECT!Thirdly, I would make my will by hand to my wife, my son, my relatives, and so on.
>>CORRECT!
i would say about what I wanted to say to them.
>>I would say about what I wanted to say to them.Fourthly, I would make a call to anyone who I hated before or anyone hurt by my words, letters and acts.
>>CORRECT!
And, I would ardently beg their forgiveness.
>>CORRECT!Lastly, I would invite my church members including the pastor over my house, and I\'d like to participate in the last worship service in my life at home.
>>CORRECT!
I really wish to die singing a gospel and a hymn with my family.
>>CORRECT!
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