homework :)

There is a tump kitty-corner from my house. From a tump, sometimes roe deers and pheasants come down to our house. Often, my neighborhood’s Jindo dog hunts a pheasants at dawn. In July, the tump becomes very green and that changes to red and yellow in October. My father usually goes there for jogging or taking pictures but I don’t like to go there because of a lot of bugs. Especially the mosquitoes are very big and strong in there, so I really hate to go there in summer. However, I like a sound of a bug at midnight from the tump. That is very tastefully.

Hi there, Sarah! Thank you for doing your homework. I\'ve never seen (or been to) a tump before. It must be nice living close to something like that. Please remember that the words \"neighbor\" and \"neighborhood\" are different. A neighbor is a person who lives next to you or near you. You can also use next-door neighbor if you want to refer specifically to the person or people who live right next to you. A neighborhood is the area or district within a town or city where you live. There is no exact definition of the word, but it often includes the idea of a social community, where the people who live within a neighborhood interact with each other regularly. Check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ There is a tump kitty-corner from my house. >> CORRECT! From a tump, sometimes roe deers and pheasants come down to our house. >> Sometimes roe deers and pheasants from the tump would come down to our house.Often, my neighborhood’s Jindo dog hunts a pheasants at dawn. >> My neighbor\'s Jindo dog would often chase the pheasants at dawn.In July, the tump becomes very green and that changes to red and yellow in October. >> In July, the tump turns into a vivid green color and it changes into red and yellow in October.My father usually goes there for jogging or taking pictures but I don’t like to go there because of a lot of bugs. >> My father usually goes there to jog or to take a picture, but I don\'t like to go there because there are a lot of bugs.Especially the mosquitoes are very big and strong in there, so I really hate to go there in summer. >> The mosquitoes, in particular, are very big so I really hate going there in summer.However, I like a sound of a bug at midnight from the tump. >> However, I like the sound that the bugs from the tump make at midnight.That is very tastefully. >> That is a very good sound. *You cannot use \"tasteful\" to describe a sound. I\'m not sure what you mean here. ^^