homework :)

The ideal time for someone to “hit the sack” is at 9-10 p.m. After the sun sets, the hormone of ‘melatonin’ starts to be secreted from our brain. The melatonin makes the person go to s[이름]p, and after then it does lots of tasks for our body. The one of the important task what the melatonin doing is activating T-CELL for our immune system, and the other task of melatonin is promoting the growth hormone. For doing effective task of melatonin, the scientists say that we have to go s[이름]p at 10 p.m at latest. However, because our body is amazingly adapted, if we always go to bed late, our body will think that is quite right time for us. Of course, the young people is good to go to s[이름]p at 10 p.m because of the growth hormone. However, if you are an adult and you are always going to s[이름]p at dawn, then keeping your cycle is better to you than changing your cycle effortfully.

Hi there, Sarah! Wow. Thank you for this little \"melatonin lesson\". Haha! I didn\'t know about this. I\'ve learned something new today because of you. Thank you. You did very well in this homework. Please review my corrections here. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ The ideal time for someone to “hit the sack” is at 9-10 p.m. >> CORRECT!After the sun sets, the hormone of ‘melatonin’ starts to be secreted from our brain. >> After the sun sets, the hormone ‘melatonin’ is secreted from our brain.The melatonin makes the person go to s[이름]p, and after then it does lots of tasks for our body. >> Melatonin helps us s[이름]p and then does a lot of tasks for our body.The one of the important task what the melatonin doing is activating T-CELL for our immune system, and the other task of melatonin is promoting the growth hormone. >> One important task of melatonin is activating the T Cell in our immune system and the other one is stimulating the growth hormone. For doing effective task of melatonin, the scientists say that we have to go s[이름]p at 10 p.m at latest. >> In order for the melatonin to do these tasks effectively, scientists say that we have to go to s[이름]p at 10 P.M. at the latest.However, because our body is amazingly adapted, if we always go to bed late, our body will think that is quite right time for us. >> However, because our body\'s ability to adapt is amazing, if we always go to bed late then our body would think that that is the right time for us to s[이름]p.Of course, the young people is good to go to s[이름]p at 10 p.m because of the growth hormone. >> Of course, young people should go to s[이름]p at 10 P.M. to stimulate their growth hormone.However, if you are an adult and you are always going to s[이름]p at dawn, then keeping your cycle is better to you than changing your cycle effortfully. >> However, if you are an adult and you always s[이름]p at dawn, then sticking to your cycle is better than making a lot of effort in changing it. OR: >> However, if you are an adult and you always s[이름]p at dawn, then sticking to your cycle is better than forcing yourself to change it.