homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Cool! ^^
Thank you for writing and sending the summary of the artcle
that we discussed in our class.
You did good; however there are some corrections.
Please check it and study it.
I am smiled at the end of your summary because
you also want to try to do what the old couples did when you will be older. :) :)
I am imagining it and it looks lovely. :) :)
See you in class Cool.
Take care :)
~~~Teacher Kris
I am summerizing newspaper on Sepember,6 for artcle1
>> I am summarizing the article 1 in the newspaper dated September 6.
This passage is story that old couple have matched their outfits for 25 years.
>> This passage is all about an old couple who have matched their outfits for 25 years.
They were become famous by their grandson.
>> They became famous by their grandson.
He posted his grandfather and grandmother\'s pictures on his twitter.
>> He posted his grandfather\'s and grandmother\'s pictured on his twitter.
People liked their pictures and became to be popular.
>> People liked their pictures and they made them popular.
They put on dress frist when they were western dancing and have kept to dress matched outfits every single day.
>> At first, they dress themselves with matched outfits at a western dancing and have kept dressing themselves with matched outfits every single day.
This story left strong impression for me.
>> This story left a strong impression for me.
When my wife and I would be older, I would like to try them on.
>> When my wife and I would be older, I would like to try what the couples did.
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