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2016-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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I am summerizing newspaper on Sepember,6 for artcle1 This passage is story that old couple have matched their outfits for 25 years. They were become famous by their grandson. He posted his grandfather and grandmother's pictures on his twitter. People liked their pictures and became to be popular. They put on dress frist when they were western dancing and have kept to dress matched outfits every single day. This story left strong impression for me. When my wife and I would be older, I would like to try them on.

강사 첨삭

Hi Cool! ^^

Thank you for writing and sending the summary of the artcle

that we discussed in our class.

You did good; however there are some corrections.

Please check it and study it.

I am smiled at the end of your summary because

you also want to try to do what the old couples did when you will be older. :) :)

I am imagining it and it looks lovely. :) :)

See you in class Cool.

Take care :)

~~~Teacher Kris


I am summerizing newspaper on Sepember,6 for artcle1

>> I am summarizing the article 1 in the newspaper dated September 6.
 This passage is story that old couple have matched their outfits for 25 years.

>> This passage is all about an old couple who have matched their outfits for 25 years.
 They were become famous by their grandson.

>> They became famous by their grandson.
 He posted his grandfather and grandmother\'s pictures on his twitter.

>> He posted his grandfather\'s and grandmother\'s pictured on his twitter.
 People liked their pictures and became to be popular.

>> People liked their pictures and they made them popular.
 They put on dress frist when they were western dancing and have kept to dress matched outfits every single day.

>>  At first, they dress themselves with matched outfits at a western dancing and have kept dressing themselves with matched outfits every single day.
 This story left strong impression for me.

>> This story left a strong impression for me.
 When my wife and I would be older, I would like to try them on.

>> When my wife and I would be older, I would like to try what the couples did.

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