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2016-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

I discribe my apartment as below. My apartment has 49 floors and I live on 26 floors. Acutally, I lived on 12 floors yet before moving out here. Fristly, I'm afraid that it lives very high apartment but now, I become satisfied. Because here is very cool wind from windows due to be highest. I like cool wind and a lot of facilities. There are gym, swimming pool, public bathhouse and so on. I don't need go far away. It is very convenient due to have useing facilities in apartment. Therefore, I like my apartment.

강사 첨삭

Hi Cool! ^^

Thank you for doing  your homework. :)

Well, you are right; it is far more convenient to stay in an apartment

located at the highest part of the building. Aside from the cool wind that goes inside

your apartment, you can also have the view of the entire city. :)

You are lucky to have that kind of apartment that you are living in because the facilities

that you need are already provided which you can meet your desires. :)

Well, have a good living. :)

See you in class Cool.

Take care. :)

~~ Teacher Kris


I discribe my apartment as below.

>> I describe my apartment as below.
 My apartment has 49 floors and I live on 26 floors.

>> My apartment has 49 floors and I live on the 26th floor.
 Acutally, I lived on 12 floors yet before moving out here.

>> Actually, I used to live on the 12th floor.

Fristly, I\'m afraid that it lives very high apartment but now, I become satisfied.

>> At first, I was afraid to live in an apartment which is located at the highest part of the building but I became satisfied.
 Because here is very cool wind from windows due to be highest. 

>> Now, I can feel the cool wind coming from the outside through the windows.
 I like cool wind and a lot of facilities.

>> I like the cool wind and there are a lot of facilities.

 There are gym, swimming pool, public bathhouse and so on.

>> Correct
 I don\'t need go far away. 

>> I don\'t need to go far away.
 It is very convenient due to have useing facilities in apartment.

>> It is very convenient due to the facilities provided in the apartment.
 Therefore, I like my apartment.

>> Correct

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