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Life seems like a never- ending series of challenge forced to choose something. We live our lives while we are making not only a small decision but also a big one, and it becomes clear before long whether or not the determination was appropriate.
During my comparatively long life there have been many wrong and adequate decisions. I 've regretted my decision several times. One of them was my choice after retiring from the army over whether I would challenge to a new world, or choose a safe way which I was used to. I went abroad and studied there, but unexpected things began to happen and hurt me. At last I found out I made a big mistake, I had to live very difficult life in the aftermath of it for years. I should prudently have decided after getting a lot of information from seniors and materials, and analyzed and judged which way was the best for me. I was not prepared enough to challenge at that time. I had to make a decision for a safe way given my insufficient preparation.
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Do not worry about your bad decisions, Sir :)
I think because of them, we get stronger and wiser ^^
Years ago, I also underwent a catastrophic situation which was a result of bad choices.
Now, I am more careful^^
See you, Sir!
Life seems like a never- ending series of challenge forced to choose something.
>>Life seems like a never- ending series of challenge wherein we are forced to choose something.
We live our lives while we are making not only a small decision but also a big one, and it becomes clear before long whether or not the determination was appropriate.
>>CORRECT!
During my comparatively long life there have been many wrong and adequate decisions.
>>CORRECT!
I \'ve regretted my decision several times.
>>CORRECT!
One of them was my choice after retiring from the army over whether I would challenge to a new world, or choose a safe way which I was used to.
>>One of them was my choice after retiring from the army.
>>I had to make a decision whether I would challenge myself to a new world, or choose a safe way which I was used to.
I went abroad and studied there, but unexpected things began to happen and hurt me.
>>CORRECT!
At last I found out I made a big mistake, I had to live very difficult life in the aftermath of it for years.
>>At last I found out I made a big mistake, I had to live very difficult life in its aftermath for years.
I should prudently have decided after getting a lot of information from seniors and materials, and analyzed and judged which way was the best for me.
>>CORRECT!
I was not prepared enough to challenge at that time.
>>I was not prepared enough for the challenge at that time.
I had to make a decision for a safe way given my insufficient preparation.
>>I had to make a decision in a safe way given my insufficient preparation.
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