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2016-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. I'm so sorry that I couldn't have a class today without any notice. In fact, I had an appointment this morning with a service engineer for repairing my air conditioner, but the customer service center didn't tell me about the exact time to visit. They told me that a service engineer would call me this morning. So, I didn't expect that he would come to my house at 9:50, the exact my class time. Anyway, I hope that this happening would give you some rest time this morning.^^ Could you tell me read and review my e-mail to the school? We have a long holiday in this week. We call it Chuseok. It's the Korean Thanksgiving Day. To celebrate Chuseok, Junyoung's father came to Korea. We filled out the school transport agreement together, and now send it to you. The starting date specified in this form is just expected date. I understand that the starting date could be changeable depending on various factors. I'll be happy to cooperate with you if you let me know how to move to next step.

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Hi there, Kaylee! Don\'t worry about what happened yesterday. I was able to take a much-needed break when you canceled your class. Thank you for that. Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! I\'m so sorry that I couldn\'t have a class today without any notice. >> I\'m sorry for canceling the class without any prior notice. In fact, I had an appointment this morning with a service engineer for repairing my air conditioner, but the customer service center didn\'t tell me about the exact time to visit. >> In fact, I had an appointment this morning with a service engineer to have my air conditioner repaired, but the customer service center staff didn\'t tell me about the exact time of his visit.  They told me that a service engineer would call me this morning. >> CORRECT! So, I didn\'t expect that he would come to my house at 9:50, the exact my class time. >> So I didn\'t expect that he would come to my house at 9:50, at our exact class time.Anyway, I hope that this happening would give you some rest time this morning.^^ >> Anyway, I hope that this incident would give you some time to rest this morning.We have a long holiday in this week. >> We have a long holiday this week.We call it Chuseok. >> CORRECT! It\'s the Korean Thanksgiving Day. >> CORRECT! To celebrate Chuseok, Junyoung\'s father came to Korea. >> CORRECT! We filled out the school transport agreement together, and now send it to you. >> We have filled out the school transport agreement together and we are now sending it to you.The starting date specified in this form is just expected date. >> The starting date specified in this form is just the expected/estimated date.I understand that the starting date could be changeable depending on various factors. >> I understand that it could change depending on various factors.I\'ll be happy to cooperate with you if you let me know how to move to next step. >> I\'ll be happy to cooperate with you if you let me know how to move on to the next step.  

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