homework
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Is spanking a good way to discipline children?
I think that a good way to discipline children is that children need a balance between carrot and stick.
Parents who overprotect their children must know that overprotect is not good way for their children to discipline them.
I think that children must know that they try to solve themselves a problem to be given their situation and try to think themselves it.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon [이름]!Happy Tuesday!
Thank you so much for your composition.
I hope that you are having a great time today.
I am so excited to hear your stories next week.
You are right. There should be a balance between punishment and reward when we try to discipline kids.
We have to explain to them as well about the wrong doing that they did.
See you on Monday. Have a wonderful holiday.
Teacher Nina
Is spanking a good way to discipline children?I think that a good way to discipline children is that children need a balance between carrot and stick.
>> I think a good way to discipline children is to make a balance between a carrot and a stick. Parents who overprotect their children must know that overprotect is not good way for their children to discipline them.>> Parents who overprotective to their children must know that it is not a good way for them to be disciplined.I think that children must know that they try to solve themselves a problem to be given their situation and try to think themselves it.
>> I think that children should know how to solve a problem in a certain situation and think about themselves.
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