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I believe that the internet has contributed to implementing a societal justice as a whistle-blower. Contrarily, it is not deniable that the internet has caused a lot of feud and turmoil to our community. I absolutely agree that there should be restrictions on the internet. Firstly, the purpose of some internet sites are regarded as negative campaigns threatening people's lives, to name a few, drug trafficking and suicide instigating sites. The censorship on these sites is crucially necessary today. Secondly, some people have intentionally spread all the false rumors using the internet whenever some significant national policies were issued as shown in the Cheonan Warship Incident and the deployment of the THAAD. If the government didn't restrict on them, the country's future undoubtedly wouldn't be prosperous. Lastly, the censorship should thoroughly impose over enormous barbarian replies on the internet. The government should take measures on them to forge a healthy society.

The wonders of the internet are indeed undeniable. Unfortunately, it also brings some disadvantages which could also mislead citizens. Thank you for doing your homework, Mr. [이름] :) Have a great week! I believe that the internet has contributed to implementing a societal justice as a whistle-blower. >>I believe that the internet has contributed to implementing a societal justice as a whistle blower. Contrarily, it is not deniable that the internet has caused a lot of feud and turmoil to our community. >>CORRECT!  I absolutely agree that there should be restrictions on the internet. >>CORRECT!Firstly, the purpose of some internet sites are regarded as negative campaigns threatening people\'s lives, to name a few, drug trafficking and suicide instigating sites. >>CORRECT!  The censorship on these sites is crucially necessary today. >>CORRECT!Secondly, some people have intentionally spread all the false rumors using the internet whenever some significant national policies were issued as shown in the Cheonan Warship Incident and the deployment of the THAAD. >>Secondly, some people have intentionally spread false rumors using the internet whenever some significant national policies were issued as shown in the Cheonan Warship Incident and the deployment of the THAAD. If the government didn\'t restrict on them, the country\'s future undoubtedly wouldn\'t be prosperous. >>CORRECT!Lastly, the censorship should thoroughly impose over enormous barbarian replies on the internet. >>Lastly, the censorship should thoroughly be imposed over enormous barbarian replies on the internet. The government should take measures on them to forge a healthy society. >>CORRECT!