homework :)

In this semester, I have no class in Friday afternoon and Monday morning. Since I have a free time in Friday evening, I get a part-time job at that time. Today I get the pay of my job, so I make a plan for traveling. With making the best use of my free time, I buy a discount ticket to going China in November 12th-14th, from Saturday afternoon to Monday morning just a few hours ago. Commonly, there is no free time for traveling in semester. However, I have a lot of free time in this semester so I could get a part-time job and buy a traveling ticket. I think this could be the “icing on the cake” in my life right now. Furthermore, this is just happened few hours ago!

Hello there, Sarah! Thank you for doing your homework. I\'m so stoked for you! Your time management skill is on point! I commend you for that. I\'m a bit envious too. Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ In this semester, I have no class in Friday afternoon and Monday morning. >> In this semester, I have no classes on Friday afternoons and Monday mornings.Since I have a free time in Friday evening, I get a part-time job at that time. >> Since I have some free time every Friday night, I got a part-time job at that time.Today I get the pay of my job, so I make a plan for traveling. >> Today, I got my salary so I made some travel plans.With making the best use of my free time, I buy a discount ticket to going China in November 12th-14th, from Saturday afternoon to Monday morning just a few hours ago. >> Making the most out of my free time, I bought a discounted ticket to China on November 12th to 14th, from Saturday afternoon to Monday morning.Commonly, there is no free time for traveling in semester. >> Usually, there is no free time for me to travel during the semester.However, I have a lot of free time in this semester so I could get a part-time job and buy a traveling ticket. >> However, I have a lot of free time in this semester so I could get a part-time job and buy an airplane ticket too.I think this could be the “icing on the cake” in my life right now. >> CORRECT!Furthermore, this is just happened few hours ago! >> Furthermore, this just happened a few hours ago!