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~~ Teacher Kris
This article is story about miracle dog.
>> This article is all about a Miracle Dog.
Thd dog\'s name is Romeo and miracle dog which survivied the earthquake.
>> The dog\'s name is Romeo which survived the earthquake.
Thd dog have been trapped in the rubble of collapsed home for 7 days.
>> The dog has been trapped in the rubble of a collapsed home for 7 days.
Owners believed the dog to have been killed due to earthquake.
>> The owners believed that the dog has been killed due to earthquake.
However, the dog was discoverd alive.
>> Correct
Thankfully, the don was under beam of home so he did not hurt.
>> Thankfully, the dog was under beam of a home so he was not hurt.
It was really miracle that the dog was alive.
>> It was really a miracle that the dog was alive.
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