homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir [이름]!
How are you? I am so happy that you did this homework. Thanks a lot for writing something about Chuseok.
Well, I heard some of my female students complain about big holidays in your country.
It\'s a good thing that men are now helping in doing house chores.
Anyway, I am looking forward to hearing your stories about your holiday.
See you later!
~Teacher Shanee
Chuseok symbolize a richness because it is a day to appreciate the joy of harvesting of the year, and also to hope to continue the good harvest again.
>>> Chuseok symbolizes richness because it is a day to appreciate the joy of harvest of the year. It is also a day to hope for more good harvest.
Koreans think that all of these are thanks to their ancestors, so they hold a memorial ceremony for their ancestors with delicious foods and go \'Seong-Myo\'(to visit the grave of family\'s ancestors).
>>> OR: Koreans think that all of these are thanks to their ancestors, so they hold a memorial ceremony for their ancestors. They offer delicious foods and also do \"Seong-Myo\" which is visiting their ancestral grave sites.
During this time, as a lot of people move at the same period, the traffic always piles up and they spend much time on the street.
>>> Correct!
So some people may go Seong-Myo in advance on uncomplicated day and they may enjoy the travel on the long Chuseok holidays.
>>> So some people may go in advance on nonbusy days and enjoy traveling on the long Chuseok holidays.
One of the biggest issue during the holiday is a holiday syndrome.
>>> One of the biggest issues during the holiday is holiday syndrome.
Chuseok is a fun day gathering the whole family, but most of the task to prepare some food is women\'s share.
>>> Chuseok is a family fun day but most tasks related to food preparation are mainly for women.
So in some cases women get a disease like a depression.
>>> So in some cases, women get depressed.
Fortunately, most recently, men are trying to relieve a women\'s burden as they share the housework.
>>> Fortunately, these days, men are trying to relieve women of their burden by sharing some housework.
I think the condition for happy Chuseok depend on awakening of men.
>>> I think the condition for a happy Chuseok depends on the awakening of men.
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