Homework

2016-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. A long Chuseok holiday was over now. My husband just has left for Malaysia. How was your holiday? Please share your story tomorrow.^^ Give three situations where you can say (or you have said) to someone, "hold your horses". 1. My mom often decides to buy something on impulse. This month, she already returned three items while saying that she was not fully satisfied. So, whenever she tries to buy something I always advice her to hold her horses. 2. A friend of mine believes in everything she hears. If she tries to buy shares according to a rumor, I have to say to her, "hold your horses". 3. In general, women need more time before going out than men. If my husband makes a push to hurry up, I would tell him to hold his horses.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Kaylee! Thank you for doing your homework. These are excellent examples! Well done! I had an awesome vacation. Thank you for listening to my stories during our class. Please check my corrections here. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!A long Chuseok holiday was over now. >> The long Chuseok holiday is over now.My husband just has left for Malaysia. >> My husband has just left for Malaysia.How was your holiday? >> CORRECT!Please share your story tomorrow.^^ >> CORRECT!1. My mom often decides to buy something on impulse. >> CORRECT! This month, she already returned three items while saying that she was not fully satisfied. >> CORRECT! So, whenever she tries to buy something I always advice her to hold her horses.>> So whenever she tries to buy something, I always tell her to \"hold her horses\".2. A friend of mine believes in everything she hears. >> CORRECT! If she tries to buy shares according to a rumor, I have to say to her, \"hold your horses\".>> If she suddenly decides to buy some stocks based on a rumor, I have to tell her, \"hold your horses\".3. In general, women need more time before going out than men. >> CORRECT! If my husband makes a push to hurry up, I would tell him to hold his horses. >> If my husband tells me to hurry up, I would tell him to hold his horses. 

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