Homework

Hello, teacher. Thank you for sharing your travel story to Manila. I always imagine to travel somewhere in a long Chuseok holiday. But, as for me I can't. As a daughter-in-law, I have to hold a memorial service for my husband's ancestors. What could be the "icing on the cake" in your life right now? Give an example. Two months ago, my academic advisor suggested to me presiding over an academic conference. I understood that this would be a good opportunity to improve my academic career. So, as soon as I got the suggestion from him, I accepted that offer. After a long preparation, I successfully presided over the conference. I believe that this experience would be helpful to develop my academic competence. After the conference, I got $1,000 in return for presiding over the conference from the organizer. I was already satisfied with having a good opportunity like that. In addition to this opportunity, it was icing on the cake to get a lot of money.

Hello, Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Check my corrections here. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!Thank you for sharing your travel story to Manila. >> CORRECT!I always imagine to travel somewhere in a long Chuseok holiday. >> I always imagine traveling somewhere during the long Chuseok holiday.But, as for me I can\'t. >> But I can\'t do that.As a daughter-in-law, I have to hold a memorial service for my husband\'s ancestors. >> CORRECT!Two months ago, my academic advisor suggested to me presiding over an academic conference. >> Two months ago, my academic adviser suggested that I preside over an academic conference.I understood that this would be a good opportunity to improve my academic career. >> I knew that this would be a good opportunity to improve my academic career. So, as soon as I got the suggestion from him, I accepted that offer. >> So I accepted the offer as soon as he suggested it.After a long preparation, I successfully presided over the conference. >> CORRECT!I believed that this experience would be helpful to develop my academic competence. >> CORRECT!After the conference, I got $1,000 in return for presiding over the conference from the organizer. >> After the conference, I got $1,000 from the organizer in exchange for presiding over the conference.I was already satisfied with having a good opportunity like that. >> I was already satisfied that I got a good opportunity like that.In addition to this opportunity, it was icing on the cake to get a lot of money. >> Getting paid for it was the icing on the cake.