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My hometown is located between two big cities. These cites have sprawled out so far. I moved here just less than 2 years ago, therefore, I don't know what my hometown used to be. However, I could easily get a glimpse of its past because there are still a few rural characters in it. My hometown's problems regarding environment are not that serious given the uncontrolled urban sprawling. We can still enjoy fresh air and clean water, in addition to widely open and picturesque scenery. A few big apartment complexes are well managed by management companies, but old residential districts remain unclean with a lot of trash bags and cars parked on narrow streets. Going back to nature may be an answer for today's serious environmental issues. Even though nature has resilience, we have to invest a lot of fortune to return nature to the origin, because we have already destroyed and damaged it severely. I've read about how hard environmental recovery in East Germany after reunification was.

Whoa! I was really impressed with your choice of words :) Your prepositions were properly placed, knowing how tricky their location is. Thank you for doing your homework, Sir [이름]! Good job! Keep improving :) My hometown is located between two big cities. >>CORRECT! These cites have sprawled out so far. >>CORRECT!  I moved here just less than 2 years ago, therefore, I don\'t know what my hometown used to be. >>CORRECT!  However, I could easily get a glimpse of its past because there are still a few rural characters in it. >>CORRECT!My hometown\'s problems regarding environment are not that serious given the uncontrolled urban sprawling. >>My hometown\'s problems regarding the environment are not that serious given the uncontrolled urban sprawling. We can still enjoy fresh air and clean water, in addition to widely open and picturesque scenery. >>CORRECT!  A few big apartment complexes are well managed by management companies, but old residential districts remain unclean with a lot of trash bags and cars parked on narrow streets. >>CORRECT!Going back to nature may be an answer for today\'s serious environmental issues. >>Going back to nature may be an answer to today\'s serious environmental issues.  Even though nature has resilience, we have to invest a lot of fortune to return nature to the origin, because we have already destroyed and damaged it severely. >>CORRECT! I\'ve read about how hard environmental recovery in East Germany after reunification was. >>I\'ve read about how hard environmental recovery was in East Germany after reunification.