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2016-09-21 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Long times ago, I had not ever wanted to do patient care. Opening my clinic, I lived hard to repay my debt, but when it stabilized somewhat, laziness came to me. I was sick and tired of my repetitive daily life and I didn't want to look into smelly mouth of the patient. As I did so, there was no way the care would be right, and patient's complaints were increased. Oneday I kept thinking what's wrong with me? To save me was a volunteer work at that time. I learned from the volunteer work what is a true doctor's attitude. There are still my juniors to hate their practice. Whenever they did that, I used to say "Let s go to a volunteer work together!".

강사 첨삭

Hello SIR [이름]! Thanks for sharing that experience. At lease you were able to motivate yourself to continue your career. I bet a lot of people experienced and are experiencing the same thing. I hope they come to realize and motivate  themselves like you did. See you later!   ~Teacher Shanee   Long times ago, I had not ever wanted to do patient care. >>> Long time ago, I had never wanted to do health care.Opening my clinic, I lived hard to repay my debt, but when it stabilized somewhat, laziness came to me. >>>  When I opened my clinic, I worked hard to repay my debt. But when it somewhat stabilized,  laziness came to me. I was sick and tired of my repetitive daily life and I didn\'t want to look into smelly mouth of the patient. >>> I was sick and tired of my repetitive daily life and I didn\'t want to look into the smelly mouths of my patients. As I did so, there was no way the care would be right, and patient\'s complaints were increased. >>> Because of that, I couldn\'t take care of my patients well and complaints increased.Oneday I kept thinking what\'s wrong with me? >>>  Correct! [One day]To save me was a volunteer work at that time. >>> What saved me was a volunteer work at that time.I learned from the volunteer work what is a true doctor\'s attitude. >>>  OR: I learned from the volunteer work what a true doctor\'s attitude is.There are still my juniors to hate their practice. >>> I have juniors who still hate their practice.Whenever they did that, I used to say \"Let s go to a volunteer work together!\". >>> Whenever they show signs, I usually say, \"Let\'s go do a volunteer work together!\"

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