homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Long times ago, I had not ever wanted to do patient care.
Opening my clinic, I lived hard to repay my debt, but when it stabilized somewhat, laziness came to me. I was sick and tired of my repetitive daily life and I didn't want to look into smelly mouth of the patient. As I did so, there was no way the care would be right, and patient's complaints were increased.
Oneday I kept thinking what's wrong with me?
To save me was a volunteer work at that time.
I learned from the volunteer work what is a true doctor's attitude.
There are still my juniors to hate their practice.
Whenever they did that, I used to say "Let s go to a volunteer work together!".
강사 첨삭
Hello SIR [이름]!
Thanks for sharing that experience.
At lease you were able to motivate yourself to continue your career.
I bet a lot of people experienced and are experiencing the same thing.
I hope they come to realize and motivate themselves like you did.
See you later!
~Teacher Shanee
Long times ago, I had not ever wanted to do patient care.
>>> Long time ago, I had never wanted to do health care.Opening my clinic, I lived hard to repay my debt, but when it stabilized somewhat, laziness came to me.
>>> When I opened my clinic, I worked hard to repay my debt. But when it somewhat stabilized, laziness came to me.
I was sick and tired of my repetitive daily life and I didn\'t want to look into smelly mouth of the patient.
>>> I was sick and tired of my repetitive daily life and I didn\'t want to look into the smelly mouths of my patients.
As I did so, there was no way the care would be right, and patient\'s complaints were increased.
>>> Because of that, I couldn\'t take care of my patients well and complaints increased.Oneday I kept thinking what\'s wrong with me?
>>> Correct! [One day]To save me was a volunteer work at that time.
>>> What saved me was a volunteer work at that time.I learned from the volunteer work what is a true doctor\'s attitude.
>>> OR: I learned from the volunteer work what a true doctor\'s attitude is.There are still my juniors to hate their practice.
>>> I have juniors who still hate their practice.Whenever they did that, I used to say \"Let s go to a volunteer work together!\".
>>> Whenever they show signs, I usually say, \"Let\'s go do a volunteer work together!\"
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