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Hello, teacher. Yesterday, I visited the district office to renew my son's passport. I am going to send a copy of this passport to school in Malaysia. Could you read and review my email? Dear [Name]. [Name]-Yinn Wai I'm emailing to let you know that Junyoung renewed his passport. The attached is a copy of his new passport. Please check the copy below. I have another question. I heard that we should pay the school fee all before Junyoung starts the school. We'd like to pay the school fee before his admission screening if possible. Could you send us(my husband and me) a letter or an invoice specifying the exact school fee? Based on the letter, we will pay the school fee as soon as possible. Please do not hesitate to contact me if there is something that I misunderstand. Best regards [이름]

Hi there, Kaylee! I checked your e-mail below. Please review my corrections here. Best of luck! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!Yesterday, I visited the district office to renew my son\'s passport. >> CORRECT!I am going to send a copy of this passport to school in Malaysia. >> I am going to send a copy of his passport to his school in Malaysia.Could you read and review my email?>> CORRECT!Dear [Name]. [Name]-Yinn Wai,>> CORRECT!I\'m emailing to let you know that Junyoung renewed his passport. >> I am sending you an e-mail to let you know that Junyoung has renewed his passport.The attached is a copy of his new passport. >> The attached document is a copy of his new passport.Please check the copy below.>> CORRECT!I have another question. >> CORRECT!I heard that we should pay the school fee all before Junyoung starts the school. >> I heard that we should pay the full tuition fee before Junyoung starts school.We\'d like to pay the school fee before his admission screening if possible. >> If it\'s possible, we would like to pay it before his admission screening.Could you send us(my husband and me) a letter or an invoice specifying the exact school fee? >> Could you send my husband and me a letter or an invoice indicating the exact amount of the tuition fee?Based on the letter, we will pay the school fee as soon as possible. >> We will pay it as soon as we receive a reply from you.Please do not hesitate to contact me if there is something that I misunderstand. >> Please do not hesitate to contact me if I misunderstood something.Best regards, >> CORRECT!Giyeon [이름] >> CORRECT!