Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When you were a child, what was your dream for the future? Has it changed?
When I was young, I wanted to be a singer.
I liked to sing a song in front of many people and I heard to do it pretty well,
even I thought that.
I liked to sing a classic music, I wanted to study about it.
But it was very need many money to study music,I guess.
Because I was young and I thought that It would be weighed on my parents shoulder,I was not brave that I wanted to study music and to be a singer to tell my parents.
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When you were a child, what was your dream for the future? Has it changed?When I was young, I wanted to be a singer.
>> correct I liked to sing a song in front of many people and I heard to do it pretty well, even I thought that.
>> I liked to sing a song in front of many people, I also heard from them that I did it well. I liked to sing a classic music, I wanted to study about it.
>> I like to sing classical songs and wanted to study it, too. But it was very need many money to study music,I guess.
>> But I guess I need a lot of money in order to study music. Because I was young and I thought that It would be weighed on my parents shoulder,I was not brave that I wanted to study music and to be a singer to tell my parents.
>> Did you mean: I thought that if I will do what I want, it would be a burden to my parents. I was not brave enough to study music, to be a singer and even to tell to my parents.
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