Homework

2016-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. Below is my homework today. When was the last time that you got something "in the bag"?How did you do it? Before I do my homework, I should tell you about the result that I applied for the scholarship. Unfortunately, I couldn't make the final cut. However, on the contrary, becoming a scholarship student in my department was in the bag last year. In order to be a scholarship student, it is required to get a high score on the strict screening. At that time, I already knew how to get a high score on the screening. Publishing my own paper on the academic magazine was the surest way to do it. Last year, I already had my own academic achievement publishing a paper. Therefore, it was in the bag. I was finally chosen for a scholarship student in my department.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Too bad you didn\'t get that scholarship. Cheer up! Remember this: \"When one door closes, another opens\". Check my corrections here. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!Below is my homework today.>> Below is my homework for today.Before I do my homework, I should tell you about the result that I applied for the scholarship.>> Before anything else, I should tell you about the result of my scholarship application. Unfortunately, I couldn\'t make the final cut. >> CORRECT!However, on the contrary, becoming a scholarship student in my department was in the bag last year.>> On the contrary, getting a scholarship in my department was in the bag last year. In order to be a scholarship student, it is required to get a high score on the strict screening.>> In order to be a scholar, it is required to get a high score on the strict screening. At that time, I already knew how to get a high score on the screening. >> CORRECT!Publishing my own paper on the academic magazine was the surest way to do it.>> CORRECT! OR:>> Publishing my paper on the academic magazine was a sure-fire way to get it. Last year, I already had my own academic achievement publishing a paper. >> Last year, publishing my own paper was an academic achievement for me.Therefore, it was in the bag. >> CORRECT!I was finally chosen for a scholarship student in my department. >> Finally, I was chosen to be a scholar in my department.

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