Homework
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What would you do today if there would be no more tomorrow andy why?
If there would be no more tomorrow, I would spend all day with my family.
I would have meal with my family and talk a variety of topics including normal life, last special day.
In spare moments, I would also chat with my friends with SNS or call to say goodbye.
And it would be great to take a walk in my town with my family.
Because I have lived in my town over 20 years. So I want to say goodbye to my dear hometown.
Spending time normally not unusually is what I want to do in last day, no more tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear [이름], once again thank you so much for sharing your insights about this.
Reading this breaks my heart...:( It\'s really one very sad composition of how you picture the last days but I am glad you chose to spend it with your family ^^
Two thumbs up for a job well done my dear...
Can\'t wait to hear your voice again...
Take care always and have a great day!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
What would you do today if there would be no more tomorrow andy why?If there would be no more tomorrow, I would spend all day with my family.
>>correctI would have meal with my family and talk a variety of topics including normal life, last special day.>>correctIn spare moments, I would also chat with my friends with SNS or call to say goodbye.
>>correctAnd it would be great to take a walk in my town with my family.
>>correctBecause I have lived in my town over 20 years.
>>correct
So I want to say goodbye to my dear hometown.
>>correctSpending time normally not unusually is what I want to do in last day, no more tomorrow.
>>correct
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