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2016-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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What would you do today if there would be no more tomorrow andy why? If there would be no more tomorrow, I would spend all day with my family. I would have meal with my family and talk a variety of topics including normal life, last special day. In spare moments, I would also chat with my friends with SNS or call to say goodbye. And it would be great to take a walk in my town with my family. Because I have lived in my town over 20 years. So I want to say goodbye to my dear hometown. Spending time normally not unusually is what I want to do in last day, no more tomorrow.

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Hi there my dear [이름], once again thank you so much for sharing your insights about this. Reading this breaks my heart...:( It\'s really one very sad composition of how you picture the last days but I am glad you chose to spend it with your family ^^ Two thumbs up for a job well done my dear... Can\'t wait to hear your voice again... Take care always and have a great day! xoxoTeacher Cam^^ What would you do today if there would be no more tomorrow andy why?If there would be no more tomorrow, I would spend all day with my family. >>correctI would have meal with my family and talk a variety of topics including normal life, last special day.>>correctIn spare moments, I would also chat with my friends with SNS or call to say goodbye. >>correctAnd it would be great to take a walk in my town with my family. >>correctBecause I have lived in my town over 20 years. >>correct So I want to say goodbye to my dear hometown. >>correctSpending time normally not unusually is what I want to do in last day, no more tomorrow. >>correct

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