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There could be not a few teenagers who have to get part-time jobs inevitably because they should support their family while they are still students. Besides them above, whether or not teenagers should get part-time jobs is a matter for parents and teenagers to carefully decide together because it has both advantages and disadvantages. Its advantages are as follows. First, teenagers could have precious experiences through the social activities. The experiences will be surely conducive to their lives in near future. Second, they could build up their spirit of independence indispensable for their future. Lastly, they could learn how to make money and how to use money, not to mention perceiving the importance of money. Contrarily, its disadvantages are as below. First, teenagers could not concentrate on their study because part-time jobs make them too tired. Second, they could not spend much time reading a lot of books, making many friends and taking up valuable hobbies including sports.

Good morning, Mr. [이름]^^ Happy Friday! I actually admire Korean teenagers who have part-time jobs since they can be responsible at an early age. Thanks for your opinion, Sir! See you Monday! There could be not a few teenagers who have to get part-time jobs inevitably because they should support their family while they are still students. >>CORRECT! Besides them above, whether or not teenagers should get part-time jobs is a matter for parents and teenagers to carefully decide together because it has both advantages and disadvantages. >>Aside from the people stated above, whether or not teenagers should get part-time jobs is a matter for parents and teenagers to carefully decide together because it has both advantages and disadvantages.Its advantages are as follows. >>CORRECT!First, teenagers could have precious experiences through the social activities. >>CORRECT! The experiences will be surely conducive to their lives in near future. >>CORRECT!Second, they could build up their spirit of independence indispensable for their future. >>CORRECT!Lastly, they could learn how to make money and how to use money, not to mention perceiving the importance of money. >>Lastly, they could learn how to make money and how to use money, not to mention perceive the importance of money.Contrarily, its disadvantages are as below. >>Contrarily, its disadvantages are stated below. First, teenagers could not concentrate on their study because part-time jobs make them too tired. >>CORRECT!Second, they could not spend much time reading a lot of books, making many friends and taking up valuable hobbies including sports. >>CORRECT!