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Have you ever eaten at a restaurant abroad? What was it like and what dish did you try?
Yes, I have eaten at a restaurant abroad. When I traveled to Taiwan with my friend last year, we searched famous street food at a night market. And we tried but we failed to have a delicious food. Those food were not our style. Lastly, there was famous restaurant. But we did not expect to food of Taiwan anymore. In a restaurant we ordered several dishes and one beer for my friend. One is made of shirimp and the other is made of green onion & beef with their special sauce. Those were so our style!
Final food in taiwan restaurant were so successful for us! Anyway, that restaurant's name was KIKI restaurant.
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Have you ever eaten at a restaurant abroad? What was it like and what dish did you try?Yes, I have eaten at a restaurant abroad.
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When I traveled to Taiwan with my friend last year, we searched famous street food at a night market.
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And we tried but we failed to have a delicious food.
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Those food were not our style.
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OR: This is not our ieal food.
Lastly, there was famous restaurant.
>>Lastly, there was a famous restaurant.
But we did not expect to food of Taiwan anymore.
>>But we were not looking forward to having Taiwanese food anymore.
In a restaurant we ordered several dishes and one beer for my friend.
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One is made of shirimp and the other is made of green onion & beef with their special sauce.
>>One is made of SHRIMP and the other is made of green onion and beed with their special sauce.
Those were so our style!
>>correctFinal food in taiwan restaurant were so successful for us! Anyway, that restaurant\'s name was KIKI restaurant.
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