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2016-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Nia

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H.W 1.As I walked down the aisle, the people STARED at me. 2. She misses her high school days. Her friends and she usually WENT to the beach. 3. Ana does not do her assignments. She will probably FAIL her subjects. 4. I HAVE been dreaming of becoming an architect when I was a child. 5. Mrs. [Name] Sarah a new dress. Ive changed my mind. I want you to correct my wrong grammar and pronoun directly^^! I will try to watch movies without subtitles I think so That will be great step haha I hope you talk alot with me on the following meeting!! cheers! Do I need to print the book we study on?

강사 첨삭

     Hello there Larry! Thank you for doing your homework on time. Ok, I will correct you during our discussion if that is what you please. I knew someone doesn\'t want to be corrected because he/she will be annoy. But correction  is learning. So, it will help.      Yes, that is right. It would be a great help for you to watch movies without subtitle. Anyway Do you like watching movies? I am going to ask you later hehe.      You do not have to print the book, but you can download it so that you can open it during our cass. We are going to have the book discussion after you download it.      Have a great day and enjoy your everyday activities.      CIAO   ~~ teacher Nia   HOMEWORK:1. As I walked down the aisle, the people STARED at me.>>CORRECT 2. She misses her high school days. Her friends and she usually WENT to the beach.>> She misses her high school days. Her friends and she usually GO to the beach.3. Ana does not do her assignments. She will probably FAIL her subjects.>> Ana does not do her assignments. She will probably FAILING her subjects. 4. I HAVE been dreaming of becoming an architect when I was a child.>> CORRECT 5. Mrs. [Name] Sarah a new dress.>> CORRECT Ive changed my mind. >> CORRECT   I want you to correct my wrong grammar and pronoun directly^^! >> I want you to correct my wrong grammar and pronounciation directly^^!I will try to watch movies without subtitles I think so That will be great step haha >>I will try to watch movies without subtitles. I think so. That will be a great step haha I hope you talk alot with me on the following meeting!! cheers! >> I hope you talk a lot with me on the following meeting!! cheers! OR: >> I  hope we can talk a lot during our class. Cheers!Do I need to print the book we study on? >> CORRECT OR: >> Do I need to print the textbook?

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