homework
학생이 쓴 원문
To be honest, I haven't ever felt that earthquakes that was danger
because earthquakes happened in korea was very weak.
However,this earthquakes were most strong so korea people shocked including me.
I think we need to prepare for natual disaster.
I haven't ever known how to do for disater like earthquakes but
I realized just how important preparing disaster in advance.
If people don't know to prepare for the disaster,
people might hurt due to rush about in confusion rather than disaster.
강사 첨삭
Hello Cool!
Wonderful day!!
I understand that English could be really difficult…
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it..
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Please study the corrections provided. :)
See you in class. :)
~~ Teacher Kris
To be honest, I haven\'t ever felt that earthquakes that was danger
>>To be honest, I didn\'t expect that the earthquake was dangerous.
because earthquakes happened in korea was very weak.
>>because the earthquakes that usually struck Korea were very weak.
However,this earthquakes were most strong so korea people shocked including me.
>>However,this earthquakes was so strong that it left the people in Korea in shock, including me.
I think we need to prepare for natual disaster.
>>I think we need to prepare for this kinds of natural disasters.
I haven\'t ever known how to do for disater like earthquakes but
>>I didn\'t know what to do during disaster like earthquakes but
I realized just how important preparing disaster in advance.
>>I realized just how important it is to prepare for this disasters in advance.
If people don\'t know to prepare for the disaster,
>>If people don\'t know to prepare for the disaster,
people might hurt due to rush about in confusion rather than disaster.
>>they might get hurt due to panic and not knowing how to deal with this disasters.
>>To be honest, I didn\'t expect that the earthquake was dangerous.
because earthquakes happened in korea was very weak.
>>because the earthquakes that usually struck Korea were very weak.
However,this earthquakes were most strong so korea people shocked including me.
>>However,this earthquakes was so strong that it left the people in Korea in shock, including me.
I think we need to prepare for natual disaster.
>>I think we need to prepare for this kinds of natural disasters.
I haven\'t ever known how to do for disater like earthquakes but
>>I didn\'t know what to do during disaster like earthquakes but
I realized just how important preparing disaster in advance.
>>I realized just how important it is to prepare for this disasters in advance.
If people don\'t know to prepare for the disaster,
>>If people don\'t know to prepare for the disaster,
people might hurt due to rush about in confusion rather than disaster.
>>they might get hurt due to panic and not knowing how to deal with this disasters.
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