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2016-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. I am going to drink a lot this evening. kkk My graduate friends arranged a good-bye party for me, so we're gathering together this evening. You should understand me even though my voice will sound weird.^^ Could you read and review the email below? Dear [Name]. [Name] Thank you for welcoming my family warmly. As you already knew, my son is going to attend the ISKL from October 13. My son and I are sill in Korea, but we will leave for Malaysia on October 8. This is the first time for my son to attend an international school. So, I have been worried if he could adjust to new school. In the meantime, the information you provided us in the email is really helpful for me. Based on the information, I will help my son prepare to go to school. I really appreciate it. Best regards [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Kaylee! Now I know why you were absent in our class this morning. Haha! That\'s okay. Don\'t worry about it. Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!I am going to drink a lot this evening. kkk >> CORRECT!My graduate friends arranged a good-bye party for me, so we\'re gathering together this evening. >> My graduate friends arranged a farewell party for me, so we\'re getting together this evening. You should understand me even though my voice will sound weird.^^ >> You should try to understand me even though my voice might sound weird. Could you read and review the email below?>> CORRECT!Dear [Name]. [Name], >> CORRECT!Thank you for welcoming my family warmly. >> CORRECT!As you already knew, my son is going to attend the ISKL from October 13. >> As you already knew, my son is going to attend the ISKL starting on October 13.My son and I are sill in Korea, but we will leave for Malaysia on October 8.>> CORRECT! >> stillThis is the first time for my son to attend an international school. >> CORRECT!So, I have been worried if he could adjust to new school. >> So I have been worried if he could adjust to his new school. In the meantime, the information you provided us in the email is really helpful for me. >> CORRECT!Based on the information, I will help my son prepare to go to school. >> Based on that, I will help my son get ready for school.I really appreciate it.>> CORRECT!Best regards, >> CORRECT!Giyeon [이름] >> CORRECT!

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