Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
I am going to drink a lot this evening. kkk
My graduate friends arranged a good-bye party for me, so we're gathering together this evening.
You should understand me even though my voice will sound weird.^^
Could you read and review the email below?
Dear [Name]. [Name]
Thank you for welcoming my family warmly.
As you already knew, my son is going to attend the ISKL from October 13.
My son and I are sill in Korea, but we will leave for Malaysia on October 8.
This is the first time for my son to attend an international school.
So, I have been worried if he could adjust to new school.
In the meantime, the information you provided us in the email is really helpful for me.
Based on the information, I will help my son prepare to go to school.
I really appreciate it.
Best regards
[이름]
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Kaylee!
Now I know why you were absent in our class this morning. Haha!
That\'s okay. Don\'t worry about it.
Please review my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT!I am going to drink a lot this evening. kkk
>> CORRECT!My graduate friends arranged a good-bye party for me, so we\'re gathering together this evening.
>> My graduate friends arranged a farewell party for me, so we\'re getting together this evening.
You should understand me even though my voice will sound weird.^^
>> You should try to understand me even though my voice might sound weird.
Could you read and review the email below?>> CORRECT!Dear [Name]. [Name], >> CORRECT!Thank you for welcoming my family warmly.
>> CORRECT!As you already knew, my son is going to attend the ISKL from October 13.
>> As you already knew, my son is going to attend the ISKL starting on October 13.My son and I are sill in Korea, but we will leave for Malaysia on October 8.>> CORRECT!
>> stillThis is the first time for my son to attend an international school.
>> CORRECT!So, I have been worried if he could adjust to new school.
>> So I have been worried if he could adjust to his new school.
In the meantime, the information you provided us in the email is really helpful for me.
>> CORRECT!Based on the information, I will help my son prepare to go to school.
>> Based on that, I will help my son get ready for school.I really appreciate it.>> CORRECT!Best regards,
>> CORRECT!Giyeon [이름]
>> CORRECT!
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