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2016-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Does being highly educated mean someone is a good person? Why or why not? Give some examples. No, I don’t think that being highly educated mean someone is a good person. On news, there are a lot of news that there are crime or fraud by high-educated people. For example, a lawyer who is in charge of high level in a law firm or court did a fraud or corruption to earn a lot of money. And some doctor did bad medical procedure or used cheap medicine to get their more profit. So I think that to be a good person need good value and behaviors not quantity of education.

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Hi there my dear [이름]!Thank you so much for doing your homework... By the way great job! You were able to share your thoughts and opinions about the said topic. I hope you will keep up the good work... Can\'t wait to hear your voice again... Take care and have a good night!xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Does being highly educated mean someone is a good person? Why or why not? Give some examples.No, I don’t think that being highly educated mean someone is a good person. >>No, I do\'t think that being highly educated means someone is a good person.On news, there are a lot of news that there are crime or fraud by high-educated people.>>There are so many news on TV regarding high educated people commiting crimes or fraud.For example, a lawyer who is in charge of high level in a law firm or court did a fraud or corruption to earn a lot of money. >>For example, a lawyer who is in charge of a high level law suit in a law firm commiting corruption to earn money.And some doctor did bad medical procedure or used cheap medicine to get their more profit. >>Or some doctors doing some bad medical procedure just to get more profit.So I think that to be a good person need good value and behaviors not quantity of education. >>Being a good person means possesing good behaviors and values and not because of their education.

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