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2016-09-29 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

Essay: What are the risks of not taking risks? => In my opinion, the risks of not taking risks are not exist. People choose not taking risks because they know it is safe.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Jacob!^_^

 Happy Wednesday!:)

 I respect your opinion. A lot of people don\'t want to take risks because of security issues.

However, missing opportunities will also lead to regrets.

There will be \"what if\'s\". You\'ll never know what will happen next if you will not decide to take the risk.

See you later in class!^^

 

_T. Mayleen (^_-)

 

In my opinion, the risks of not taking risks are not exist.

>> In my opinion, the risks of not taking risks don\'t exist.

OR: In my opinion, there\'s no such thing as risks of not not taking risks.

 People choose not taking risks because they know it is safe.

>> People choose not to take risks because they know it\'s safer.

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