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2016-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. Today, I finished packing and moving my baggages. They were all 40 boxes. I was too tired to clean my house after moving them. My whole body really aches. kkk Give an example situation (or incident) where you can say "it takes two to tango". When we raise children as parents, we should tell a lie often to soothe the crying children. One day, my son pestered my couple to play outside together at night. We tried to persuade him that we shouldn't do that because it's too late to play outside, But, we failed to persuade him, so he kept pestering us. At that time, I thought out trick for solving this problems. I told my son that children can't play outside at night by law, and the policemen would take the children to the policy station. Although my trick, the situation didn't get well because it takes two tango. Then, my husband didn't agree with my idea to tell a lie for solving that situation. Finally, I became a liar to my son. T.T

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Kaylee! Thanks for dropping by and doing your homework. Baggage means \"personal belongings packed in suitcases for traveling\", but you packed your things in \"boxes\", not in suitcases, right? So you can just use \"things\" or \"stuff\" to refer to them, instead of \"baggage\".  Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!Today, I finished packing and moving my baggages. >> Today, I finished packing up and moving my stuff.They were all 40 boxes. >> There was a total of 40 boxes. OR: >> All in all, there were 40 boxes.I was too tired to clean my house after moving them.>> CORRECT! My whole body really aches. kkk >> CORRECT! OR: >> I\'m aching all over.When we raise children as parents, we should tell a lie often to soothe the crying children. >> As a parent, I should tell a lie to soothe my crying child.One day, my son pestered my couple to play outside together at night. >> One day, my son pestered us to let him play outside at night.We tried to persuade him that we shouldn\'t do that because it\'s too late to play outside, >> We tried to persuade him that we couldn\'t do that because it\'s too late to play outside.But, we failed to persuade him, so he kept pestering us. >> But we failed to persuade him, so he kept on pestering us. At that time, I thought out trick for solving this problems. >> At that time, I thought about a solution to solve this problem.I told my son that children can\'t play outside at night by law, and the policemen would take the children to the policy station. >> I told my son that children can\'t play outside at night according to the law and the policemen would take the children to the police station.Although my trick, the situation didn\'t get well because it takes two tango. >> Despite my solution, the problem was not resolved because it takes two to tango.Then, my husband didn\'t agree with my idea to tell a lie for solving that situation. >> My husband didn\'t agree with my idea about telling a lie to solve the problem back then.Finally, I became a liar to my son. T.T >> In the end, I became a liar in my son\'s eyes.

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