Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: If you had a chance to live anywhere you could, where would it be and why?
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.
If I had a chance to live anywhere I could, I want to live in Australia. It's because Australia has the great weather in whole year, and famous for welfare system. And there is not too countryside, not too downtown. So I want to live there. I love Korea, but something interrupt my way. I want to live my country.
강사 첨삭
Happy Thursday, [이름]! :)
Great job today! Keep on studying and do your best!
I know you\'re going to succeed in the future!
Hold on and never give up!!!
See you soon!!!
Love,
Teacher Carmen ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:*CREATIVE WRITING: If you had a chance to live anywhere you could, where would it be and why?REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.If I had a chance to live anywhere I could, I want to live in Australia.
>> Correct!
It\'s because Australia has the great weather in whole year, and famous for welfare system.
>> It\'s because the weather in Australia is great for the whole year and it is famous for its welfare system.
And there is not too countryside, not too downtown.
>> It is not too old-fashioned and too modernized.
So I want to live there.
>> Correct!
I love Korea, but something interrupt my way.
>> I love Korea but something went in between my way.
I want to live my country.
>> I want to live in my country.
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