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2016-09-29 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: *CREATIVE WRITING: If you had a chance to live anywhere you could, where would it be and why? REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun. If I had a chance to live anywhere I could, I want to live in Australia. It's because Australia has the great weather in whole year, and famous for welfare system. And there is not too countryside, not too downtown. So I want to live there. I love Korea, but something interrupt my way. I want to live my country.

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Happy Thursday, [이름]! :)  Great job today! Keep on studying and do your best! I know you\'re going to succeed in the future! Hold on and never give up!!! See you soon!!!   Love, Teacher Carmen ^^   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:*CREATIVE WRITING: If you had a chance to live anywhere you could, where would it be and why?REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.If I had a chance to live anywhere I could, I want to live in Australia. >> Correct! It\'s because Australia has the great weather in whole year, and famous for welfare system. >> It\'s because the weather in Australia is great for the whole year and it is famous for its welfare system. And there is not too countryside, not too downtown. >> It is not too old-fashioned and too modernized. So I want to live there. >> Correct! I love Korea, but something interrupt my way. >> I love Korea but something went in between my way. I want to live my country. >> I want to live in my country.        

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