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2016-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. I'm not sure if I told you properly about my move yesterday. I categorized and packed up my stuff according to the type of them. After my works, the moving company repacked up them with strong casing and transport them. So, I was aching all over. kkk Give an example situation (or incident) where you can say "it's a small world/what a small world". Several years ago, I went to Cebu Island, Philippines to enjoy my summer vacation with my family. Then, I stayed in the J-Park Island Resort, which has a wonderful water park in it. While playing at the water park, I met my pervious boss there. He quit his job to change jobs within the same field, and we hadn't meet each other after then. At that time, I thought that it's a small world. I've never expect to meet him in Philippines, not in Korea.

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Hi there, Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!I\'m not sure if I told you properly about my move yesterday. >> I\'m not sure if I\'ve properly explained to you about what happened yesterday. I categorized and packed up my stuff according to the type of them. >> I categorized and packed up my stuff according to the type of item.After my works, the moving company repacked up them with strong casing and transport them. >> After that, the movers re-packed them in sturdy boxes and transported them.So, I was aching all over. kkk >> CORRECT!Several years ago, I went to Cebu Island, Philippines to enjoy my summer vacation with my family. >> CORRECT!Then, I stayed in the J-Park Island Resort, which has a wonderful water park in it. >> Back then, I stayed in the J-Park Island Resort which has a wonderful water park in it.While playing at the water park, I met my pervious boss there. >> While having fun with my family at the water park, I met my previous boss.He quit his job to change jobs within the same field, and we hadn\'t meet each other after then. >> He quit our company to change his job within the same field and we hadn\'t met each other since then.At that time, I thought that it\'s a small world. >> CORRECT!I\'ve never expect to meet him in Philippines, not in Korea. >> I\'ve never expected to meet him in Korea, much more in the Philippines.

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