homework
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Essay: Is laughter 'the best medicine'? What definition would you give for laughter?
=> I disagree of the idea of laughter is the best medicine. When people smile, they think of things what they think funny. And they just react when they confront similar situation.
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I think the idea of laughter as the best medicine has some medical basis.
Laughter triggers healthy physical changes in the body.
Anyway, I respect your opinion.
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_T. Mayleen :)
I disagree of the idea of laughter is the best medicine.
>> I disagree with the idea that laughter is the best medicine.
When people smile, they think of things what they think funny.
>> When people smile, they only think of things that are funny or happy.
And they just react when they confront similar situation.
>> They just do it to avoid confrontation with reality.
OR: They\'d smile for a bit but it won\'t change ther situation.
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