homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is the difference between true and temporary happiness?
I think true happiness is continuous for long time.
And even when I am alone it makes me smile.
But temporary happiness is just temporary.
So when I am alone I feel lonely and some regretful.
When I am happy in mind I feel true happy.
What I am happy physically is temporary happiness.
강사 첨삭
Hi Hwa Shin! ^^
A wonderful evening!
Thank you for sending in your homework. It\'s good to read your thoughts about true happiness.
I would definitely agree with you on this. Happiness is something that satisfies and gives contentment
to your heart and mind. Good job on this essay. ^^
Teacher Glenda^^
Here are my corrections:
What is the difference between true and temporary happiness?I think true happiness is continuous for long time.
>> I think true happiness is continuous.
or
>> I think true happiness is a long term happiness.
And even when I am alone it makes me smile.
>> So even when I\'m alone, I can smile and feel happy.
But temporary happiness is just temporary.
>> But temporary happiness is just short-term.
or
>> But temporary happiness is just short-lived.
So when I am alone I feel lonely and some regretful.>> So when I am alone I feel lonely and regretful.
When I am happy in mind I feel true happy.>> When I\'m happy in mind and heart, I feel that\'s the true happiness.
What I am happy physically is temporary happiness.
>> Physical and material happiness is a temporary happiness.
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