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2016-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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What is the difference between true and temporary happiness? I think true happiness is continuous for long time. And even when I am alone it makes me smile. But temporary happiness is just temporary. So when I am alone I feel lonely and some regretful. When I am happy in mind I feel true happy. What I am happy physically is temporary happiness.

강사 첨삭

Hi Hwa Shin! ^^ A wonderful evening!   Thank you for sending in your homework. It\'s good to read your thoughts about true happiness. I would definitely agree with you on this. Happiness is something that satisfies and gives contentment to your heart and mind. Good job on this essay. ^^   Teacher Glenda^^   Here are my corrections:   What is the difference between true and temporary happiness?I think true happiness is continuous for long time. >> I think true happiness is continuous. or >> I think true happiness is a long term happiness. And even when I am alone it makes me smile. >> So even when I\'m alone, I can smile and feel happy. But temporary happiness is just temporary. >> But temporary happiness is just short-term. or >> But temporary happiness is just short-lived. So when I am alone I feel lonely and some regretful.>> So when I am alone I feel lonely and regretful. When I am happy in mind I feel true happy.>> When I\'m happy in mind and heart, I feel that\'s the true happiness.   What I am happy physically is temporary happiness. >> Physical and material happiness is a temporary happiness.

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