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2016-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Essay: What are the biggest problems among neighbors? What kind of neighbors don't you like? => I think the biggest problem among neighbors is noise issue because some of noises can make neighbor upset. The worst neighbors that make me angry is drunken man who shouts loudly at 3am. I cannot believe he did't arrested by police.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Jason!^_^   That is so true. Noisy neighbors are realy upsetting. If we\'d complain, they\'d think we are not considerate. Other problems are pets, cleanliness, etc. Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework. Well done! :) See you tomorrow!   _T. Mayleen^^   I think the biggest problem among neighbors is noise issue because some of noises can make neighbor upset. >> I think the biggest problem among neighbors is noise issue because some noise can make neighbors upset.   The worst neighbors that make me angry is drunken man who shouts loudly at 3am. >> My worst neighbor is a drunken man who shouts loudly at 3 a.m. and it makes me angry.   I cannot believe he did\'t arrested by police. >> I cannot believe no one complained him to the police yet.

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