Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
Last Saturday, I arrived in Malaysia safely.
Thank you for your sincere sympathy about my grandma's death.
As I already told you, your warm words made me feel better.
When I heard that my grandma past away from my uncle, I called my husband to inform her death.
As soon as he knew her death, he bought a plane ticket to Korea and came to the funeral place.
Actually, I didn't expect that my husband came to Korea to attend my grandma's funeral.
He is working in Malaysia, so he could ask my family to understand that he is absent from her funeral.
Although he didn't have the responsibility to attend her funeral, he came to the funeral place without any hesitation.
I was really moved by his attitude.
I could feel that he thought my grandma as his grandma.
Thanks to my husband and you, I could be fully consoled, so I'm alright now.
Again, I really appreciate for your consolation.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Kaylee!
I miss you so much!
Thank you for updating me about your life and your condition.
I\'m relieved that you have arrived there safely.
It\'s good to know that you found solace in my words. I honestly don\'t know how to console you.
Take good care of yourself. Good luck with your future endeavors.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT!Last Saturday, I arrived in Malaysia safely.
>> CORRECT!Thank you for your sincere sympathy about my grandma\'s death.
>> CORRECT!As I already told you, your warm words made me feel better.
>> CORRECT!
When I heard that my grandma past away from my uncle, I called my husband to inform her death.
>> When I heard from my uncle that my grandma passed away, I called my husband to inform him about it.
As soon as he knew her death, he bought a plane ticket to Korea and came to the funeral place.
>> As soon as he found out about her death, he bought a plane ticket to Korea and came to the funeral place.Actually, I didn\'t expect that my husband came to Korea to attend my grandma\'s funeral.
>> Actually, I didn\'t expect that my husband would do that.
OR:>> Actually, I didn\'t expect my husband to attend the funeral.He is working in Malaysia, so he could ask my family to understand that he is absent from her funeral.
>> He is working in Malaysia so he could ask my family to understand his situation.Although he didn\'t have the responsibility to attend her funeral, he came to the funeral place without any hesitation.
>> Although he didn\'t have to attend her funeral, he still did that without any hesitation. I was really moved by his attitude.
>> I was really moved by his gesture.I could feel that he thought my grandma as his grandma.
>> I could feel that he thought of my grandma as his own grandma.Thanks to my husband and you, I could be fully consoled, so I\'m alright now.
>> Thanks to my husband and you, I was fully consoled so I\'m alright now.Again, I really appreciate for your consolation.
>> Again, I really appreciate your consolation.
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