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2016-10-11 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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We can not always get along with others without any conflicts because human's heart could be as much eruptible as magma. Conflicts among loving and loved people tend to be more fierce because love and hatred are derived from the same root. That is why disputes and discords arise among close relations so easily.There are astronomical examples here and there. Before wedding, a man's friend and his fiance disliked each other. and his friend opposed the marriage. After wedding, the husband began to hate his wife because she tried to control everything related to the friend as possible as she can. Their marriage ended up divorcing. Someone introduced a female friend of his girl friend to his high school friend. Both of two couples married, and one of them divorced. After divorcing, he continued to meet his friend's wife alone and secretly. The friendship ended up falling apart. We have to maintain to show our decent manners and should not be confused between lovers and friends.

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Oh, nice example Mr. [이름]! Decency is something we have to maintain eternally. We cannot please everyone, so being calm, composed or well-mannered helps a lot. See you! We can not always get along with others without any conflicts because human\'s heart could be as much eruptible as magma. >>We can not always get along with others without any conflicts because human\'s heart could be as eruptible as magma. Conflicts among loving and loved people tend to be more fierce because love and hatred are derived from the same root. >>Conflicts among loving and loved people tend to be fiercer because love and hatred are derived from the same root.  That is why disputes and discords arise among close relations so easily. >>CORRECT! There are astronomical examples here and there. >>CORRECT!Before wedding, a man\'s friend and his fiance disliked each other. and his friend opposed the marriage. >>Before the wedding, a man\'s friend and his fiance disliked each other, and his friend opposed the marriage. After wedding, the husband began to hate his wife because she tried to control everything related to the friend as possible as she can. >>Afterwards, the husband began to hate his wife because she tried to control everything related to the friend as possible as she can.  Their marriage ended up divorcing. >>CORRECT!Someone introduced a female friend of his girl friend to his high school friend. >>CORRECT! Both of two couples married, and one of them divorced. >>Both of them married, and one of them divorced. After divorcing, he continued to meet his friend\'s wife alone and secretly. >>CORRECT! The friendship ended up falling apart. >>CORRECT!We have to maintain to show our decent manners and should not be confused between lovers and friends. >>We have to maintain showing our decent manners and we should not be confused between the difference of being lovers and friends.

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