homework

Describe your favorite place in as much detail as possible.possible My favorite place is my house. Especially in my living room I am comfortable. In living room,there are sofa and bookshelves. When I sit on the sofa and read books, I feel comfortable. At night, on the floor we put blankets. My children and I sleep there. I love to sleep in the blankets on the floor better than bed.

    A radiant Tuesday dear,   I would definitely agree with you. For me, one of my favorite place is our house as well. It always feels comfortable to be at home. Aside from having your family with you, it\'s the safest and coziest place to be. ^^ Thank you for this composition dear ^^   Teacher Glenda   Here are my corrections: Describe your favorite place in as much detail as possible.   My favorite place is my house. >> Correct Especially in my living room I am comfortable. >>I am very comfortable especially in my living room. In living room,there are sofa and bookshelves. >> In our living, there are sofa and bookshelves. When I sit on the sofa and read books, I feel comfortable. >> Correct At night, on the floor we put blankets. My children and I sleep there. >> At night, we put blankets on th floor and my children would sleep on it. I love to sleep in the blankets on the floor better than bed. >> I love sleeping on the floor with blankets than sleeping on the bed.