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2016-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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It is not simply easy for us to describe our lives with a color since every color could be expressed its own meanings in accordance with people's subjective perspectives. Hence, I want my life to be classified into three parts such as the past perfect, the past, and the present and the present progressive life. My past perfect life would have been dyed red and orange. I had lived my life very dynamically and accomplished more compared to common people until I stayed in the army. The second part of my life has lasted for about ten years roaming around the world, chasing something untouchable, and trying to keep my dignity, honor and pride. I'd like to paint the past life with blue and gray. My new life has begun since this year, and the colors in my present and present progressive life have been turning into orange and brown. I have been trying to brush up on my language skills and raising my past passion quotient. The most important change is the increase of thanks to God and people.

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If I were to describe mine, it would be red.^^ Red has always been my favorite color, and it signifies passion. Though sometimes it is correlated with horror and violence, I like how it makes me feel alive. If you take a look at my stuff, you can see that most of them are red^^ See you tomorrow, Sir [이름]! It is not simply easy for us to describe our lives with a color since every color could be expressed its own meanings in accordance with people\'s subjective perspectives. >>It is not simply easy for us to describe our lives with a color since every color could express its own meanings in accordance with people\'s subjective perspectives. Hence, I want my life to be classified into three parts such as the past perfect, the past, and the present and the present progressive life. >>Hence, I want my life to be classified into three parts such as the past perfect, the past, the present and the present progressive life. My past perfect life would have been dyed red and orange. >>CORRECT!  I had lived my life very dynamically and accomplished more compared to common people until I stayed in the army. >>CORRECT!  The second part of my life has lasted for about ten years roaming around the world, chasing something untouchable, and trying to keep my dignity, honor and pride. >>CORRECT!  I\'d like to paint the past life with blue and gray. >>CORRECT! My new life has begun since this year, and the colors in my present and present progressive life have been turning into orange and brown. >>CORRECT!  I have been trying to brush up on my language skills and raising my past passion quotient. >> I have been trying to brush up on my language skills and raise my past passion quotient. The most important change is the increase of thanks to God and people. >>The most important change is the increase of my passion thanks to God and people. I just guessed this so maybe, you meant this: >>The most important change is the increase of gratitude to God and people.

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