Homework

Hello, teacher Today, I went to my son's elementary school. He got his admission screening this morning. After his screening, we visited his class room and met his classmates. They kindly welcomed my family, so we are very happy. A Korean girl who is also the same class is assigned to help my son during class. The girl is very kind to my boy, so I'm really relieved about his school life. She might be helpful for my son.^^ Could you read my email below? Thank you for welcoming my family today. I'm afraid I haven't fully understood you because of my broken English. As you know, we didn't have enough time to have a Q-and A session. So, I am e-mailing you to ask some questions regarding my son's school life. Could you reply about the questions below? 1. Family ID : I heard that I have to have a family ID to use POS website. Could you let me know? To be contined at the next homework.^^

Hi there, Kaylee! You don\'t need to call this your \"homework\". It\'s not actually your \"homework\". It\'s more like a \"composition\" or a \"writing\" that you want me to check. Anyway, I checked your sentences here. Please review my corrections. ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher! >> CORRECT!Today, I went to my son\'s elementary school. >> CORRECT!He got his admission screening this morning. >> He had his admission screening test this morning.After his screening, we visited his classroom and met his classmates. >> CORRECT!They kindly welcomed my family, so we are very happy. >> They welcomed my family kindly so we were very happy.A Korean girl who is also the same class is assigned to help my son during class.>> A Korean girl, who is in the same class, was assigned to help my son during the class. The girl is very kind to my boy, so I\'m really relieved about his school life. >> The girl was very kind to my boy so I\'m really relieved.She might be helpful for my son.^^ >> She will be a big help to my son.Thank you for welcoming my family today. >> CORRECT!I\'m afraid I haven\'t fully understood you because of my broken English. >> I\'m afraid I didn\'t fully understand you because of my broken English.As you know, we didn\'t have enough time to have a Q-and A session. >> As you know, we didn\'t have enough time for a Q&A session.So, I am e-mailing you to ask some questions regarding my son\'s school life.>> CORRECT! Could you reply about the questions below?>> Could you answer some of my questions below?1. Family ID : I heard that I have to have a family ID to use the POS website. >> CORRECT! Could you let me know? >> Could you let me know more about this?To be contined at the next homework.^^ >> To be continued in my next composition.