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2. After school activities : Can my son still register for after school activities? My son wants to learn badminton on Monday, and taekwondo on Thursday and Friday. I hope my son can have opportunities to learn them.
3. School bus service fee : As far as I know, we didn't pay bus service fee yet. Could you let me know what should I do?
4. Class time table : I heard that students should bring their swimsuits in their p.e. class. In order to prepare that, I'd like to know my son's class time table.
5. School materials : I know my son only needs to have writing supplies when he goes to school tomorrow. Can my son receive his text books and other school materials tomorrow?
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Hi there, Kaylee!
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~Teacher Marie~
Below is the next part of the email.>> CORRECT!2. After school activities : Can my son still register for after school activities?
>> CORRECT!
My son wants to learn badminton on Monday, and taekwondo on Thursday and Friday.
>> CORRECT!
I hope my son can have opportunities to learn them.>> I hope my son can get an opportunity to learn them.
3. School bus service fee : As far as I know, we didn\'t pay bus service fee yet.
>> As far as I know, we didn\'t pay the school bus fee yet.
Could you let me know what should I do?>> Could you tell me what I should do?
OR:>> Could you tell me what to do?4. Class time table : I heard that students should bring their swimsuits in their p.e. class.
>> I heard that the students should bring their swimsuit in their P.E. class.
In order to prepare that, I\'d like to know my son\'s class time table.>> In order to prepare for that, I\'d like to know my son\'s class schedule.5. School materials : I know my son only needs to have writing supplies when he goes to school tomorrow.
>> I know that my son only needs to bring some writing supplies when he goes to school tomorrow.
Can my son receive his text books and other school materials tomorrow?
>> Will my son receive his textbooks and other school materials tomorrow?
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