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I don't agree with the idea that inner beauty is the most important thing. The idea might have been coined a long time ago, when medical skills and techniques were not that developed up to the level of successful plastic surgery. The idea might have created to encourage common people who have ordinary appearances. Someone, who I have known for years, has become beautiful, confident and elegant. Needless to say, she confessed she underwent cosmetic surgery months ago. After the surgery, she has gotten her confidence back and has been trying to possess inner beauty lately. She is certainly not who used to be. I'm not promoting plastic surgery so explicitly. I'm arguing that both inner beauty and good looking are equally important. Too much surgery and makeup could cause another problems and people's disgusting. Therefore, It is noted that plastic surgery and makeup imply a double-edged sword like wine. Cosmetic surgery is no longer a taboo in Korea. Too much is as bad as too little.

Whew, your opinion is golden :) Honestly, a lot of people believe that superficial beauty is not important, but in my case, I hate it when people totally ignore the way they look by not maintaing an appearance pleasing to the eye. I mean, they don\'t even brush their hair, or they sometimes go somewhere like they just rolled out of the bed! Managing your appearance itself is a form of etiquette, manner, or courtesy :) However, a beautiful face with an awful heart is totally useless. See you tomorrow, Sir! I don\'t agree with the idea that inner beauty is the most important thing. >>CORRECT! The idea might have been coined a long time ago, when medical skills and techniques were not that developed up to the level of successful plastic surgery. >>CORRECT!  The idea might have created to encourage common people who have ordinary appearances. >>CORRECT! Someone, who I have known for years, has become beautiful, confident and elegant. >>CORRECT!  Needless to say, she confessed she underwent cosmetic surgery months ago. >>CORRECT! After the surgery, she has gotten her confidence back and has been trying to possess inner beauty lately. >>CORRECT!  She is certainly not who used to be. >>CORRECT! >>She is not certainly who she used to be. I\'m not promoting plastic surgery so explicitly. >>CORRECT! I\'m arguing that both inner beauty and good looking are equally important. >>I\'m arguing that both inner beauty and good looks are equally important. Too much surgery and makeup could cause another problems and people\'s disgusting. >>Too much surgery and makeup could cause other problems and make people look disgusting. Therefore, It is noted that plastic surgery and makeup imply a double-edged sword like wine. >>Therefore, it is noted that plastic surgery and makeup imply a double-edged sword like wine. Cosmetic surgery is no longer a taboo in Korea. >>CORRECT! Too much is as bad as too little. >>CORRECT!