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I think that nowadays, people are fighting for gender equality~
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See you on Monday!
Basically, it\'s not right to exclude from certain professions because of their gender.
>>Basically, it\'s not right to exclude people from certain professions because of their gender.
It\'s true that some jobs don\'t seem to go well with their genders.
>>CORRECT!
However, we can complement the limitations with some measures.
>>CORRECT!
A long time ago, all nurses were surely females, but nowadays male nurses are common.
>>CORRECT!
When nurses have to take care of heavy patients, it is certainly better for male nurses to do it than females.
>>CORRECT!
About 20 years ago, there was no male caddie in the golf courses here.
>>CORRECT!
These days, male caddies have been growing.
>>These days, the number of male caddies has been growing.
Female golfers tend to prefer young charming male caddies to females.
>>CORRECT!
Teachers of elementary schools include around 80 % of females.
>>Teachers of elementary schools consists of around 80 % of females.
Once the night duty for female teachers have emerged as a social issue.
>>Once the night duty for female teachers has emerged as a social issue.
I don\'t know how it was addressed, but I guess that the government could take measures such as additional employments of school guards, CCTV installations, and so on.
>>CORRECT!
In the Army, all branches are opened for female volunteers.
>> In the Army, all branches have been opened for female volunteers.
OR>> In the Army, all branches are open for female volunteers.
Meanwhile, I have no idea about nuns.
>>CORRECT!
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