homework

Persuasive Essay: Does Facebook (or other forms of social media) create isolation? No, it doesn't Now I am not doing Facebook. But I think Facebook creates connection rather than isolation. I think people can have their thought jointly through Facebook. What we meet and talk directly is social relationship. And what we come to understand each other through Facebook is also social relationship.

Hi Hwa Shin! ^^ A powerful Monday!   Here we go with another start of a new week. Some of us will become busy again. I\'m excited to hear from you again. See in class! ^^   Teacher Glenda     Here are my corrections: Persuasive Essay: Does Facebook (or other forms of social media) create isolation?No, it doesn\'t(.) >> Correct but don\'t forget the punctuation mark. ^^ Now I am not doing Facebook. >> Now I am not using Facebook. But I think Facebook creates connection rather than isolation. >> Correct I think people can have their thought jointly through Facebook.>> I think people can have their thoughts connected through Facebook. What we meet and talk directly is social relationship. >> When we talk and meet on Facebook creates social relationship. And what we come to understand each other through Facebook is also social relationship. >> And what we come to understand about each other through Facebook is also social relationship.