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It's not easy for people to remarry shortly after divorce because of mental trauma. That is why many single moms and dads tend to live raising his or her children alone. Sometimes we would see some abnormal scenes in TV dramas, which have shown us househusbands' stories. I remember that Lynette's husband has had to take a role as a househusband once in the American drama titled 'desperate housewives.' Anyway, they have been growing in our community these days due to several unconstructive reasons. It's possible for men to be as good as women at parenting. Sensitive men could be good at parenting. However, Traditionally men have played their roles as a worker outside, while women have taken care of their children at home. All things considered, sharing parenting would be paying off. With the anti-corruption law coming into effect, the entire family members have begun to have dinner together at home according to the reports. Sharing parenting has already come true.
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Good morning Sir [이름]!
Shared parenting is indeed a good idea, without leaving the burden of roles and responsibilities to one person :)
Anyway, being raised in a family full of love and laughter, I strongly believe that a dad and a mom can equally raise their children
well^^
It\'s not easy for people to remarry shortly after divorce because of mental trauma.
>>CORRECT!
That is why many single moms and dads tend to live raising his or her children alone.
>>That is why many single moms and dads tend to raise his or her children alone.
Sometimes we would see some abnormal scenes in TV dramas, which have shown us househusbands\' stories.
>>CORRECT!
I remember that Lynette\'s husband has had to take a role as a househusband once in the American drama titled \'desperate housewives.\'
>>I remember that Lynette\'s husband has had to take a role as a househusband once in the American drama titled \'Desperate
Housewives.\'
Anyway, they have been growing in our community these days due to several unconstructive reasons.
>>Anyway, their number has been growing in our community these days due to several unconstructive reasons.
It\'s possible for men to be as good as women at parenting.
>>CORRECT!
Sensitive men could be good at parenting.
>>CORRECT!
However, Traditionally men have played their roles as a worker outside, while women have taken care of their children at home.
>>However, traditionally, men have played their roles as a worker outside, while women have taken care of their children at
home.
All things considered, sharing parenting would be paying off.
>>All things considered, shared parenting would be paying off.
With the anti-corruption law coming into effect, the entire family members have begun to have dinner together at home according to the reports.
>>CORRECT!
Sharing parenting has already come true.
>>Shared parenting has already come true.
>>Sharing parenting responsibilities has already come true.
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