homework

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~~Teacher Erine~~

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Watching television is bad for children. Use specific details and examples to support your answer.
I think that watching television has bad effects to children than good effects.

>> I think that watching television has more bad effects to children than good effects.

There are many TV programs that children could choose.

>> Correct

These can be a educational program but in daytime when children are at home, many animations are brocasted.

>> These can be an educational program but in daytime when children are at home, many animations are broadcasted.

So most of children can\'t prevent them from temptation and then they watch a program that is not related to education.

>> So most children can\'t prevent the temptation and then they watch a program that is not related to education.

Also, in the night some movies that teenagers shouldn\'t watch are brocasted.

>> Also, at night, some movies that teenagers shouldn\'t watch are broadcasted.

If teenagers who watch them secretly take definitely bad effects.

>> Teenagers who watch them secretly definitely take bad effects.

In conclusion, watching television can be good for children but it has many disadvantages for children.

>> In conclusion, watching television can be good for children but has many disadvantages, too.