homework
학생이 쓴 원문
School is basically the place to study and to make the good friends.
Thus Having a good school-life is to give a shape to your dream through hard study and to make many good friends to be your properties of future.
When I was getting old and I have gone out into the world, I could unexpectedly meet a lot of people who regreted not to study during their schllo life.
However, although you regeted later, you couldn't go back on that time and you couldn't be that age.
Instead, you have no option but to try harder on your current position.
In my opinion, this is even more difficult than to try it during the school life.
So I'd like to say the lesson learned from my school life to the youth.
" Make dreams, make friends and study hard for your future"
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir [이름]!
Thanks a lot for sharing the lesson that you learned.
Since we are humans, we do a lot of things that we regret later in life.
But it\'s a good thing we have some people who become our mentors. They teach us what we should and should not do.
I am looking forward to having a great discussion with you later. See you!
~Teacher Shanee
School is basically the place to study and to make the good friends.
>>> School is basically the place to study and make good friends.Thus Having a good school-life is to give a shape to your dream through hard study and to make many good friends to be your properties of future.>>> Thus, having a good school-life is shaping your dream through studying hard and making many good friends whom you will treasure in the futire.
When I was getting old and I have gone out into the world, I could unexpectedly meet a lot of people who regreted not to study during their schllo life.
>>> When I was getting old and and have gone out into the world, I could unexpectedly meet a lot of people who regretted not studying during their younger days.However, although you regeted later, you couldn\'t go back on that time and you couldn\'t be that age.
>>> However, although you regretted later, you couldn\'t go back to that time and age.Instead, you have no option but to try harder on your current position.
>>> Instead, you have no option but to try harder in your current position.In my opinion, this is even more difficult than to try it during the school life.
>>> Correct!So I\'d like to say the lesson learned from my school life to the youth.\" Make dreams, make friends and study hard for your future\"
>>> Correct!
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