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2016-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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Teacher SOPHIA Lively Monday again! How was your weekend? There were better than last week? I hope so It will. Anyway I spent a weekend on school and it was a not to bad. I draw a picture on hole week because professer set a take to us, have to completly finished a your each pictures. But I though its impossible homework for me. But maybe other students will done. By the way Monday's illustration workshop class is my favorite lecture. Actually it isn't a workshop, its a drawing class like other class. But it is best because of nice professer and I like illust. I can't completly defiened a different thing between fine art and illust yet. I though illust is more simple than fine art. Many fine artist though illustration isn't belong to an art, But I couldn't agree about their opinion, I don' think so like them. haha 1. unless 2. in case 3. in case 4. in case 5. unless 6. unless 7. in case 8. in case 9. in case. 10. unless

강사 첨삭

Hello Sunny,

I\'m happy to hear that you are enjoying what you are doing.

Keep it up!

I hope I can see one of your paintings one of these days.

Teacher Sophia

Here are your corrections:

Teacher SOPHIA
Lively Monday again!

>>
How was your weekend?

>> CORRECT

>> OR: How did you spend your weekend?

There were better than last week?

>> Was it better than last week?

I hope so It will.

>> I hope it was better than last week.
Anyway I spent a weekend on school and it was a not to bad.

>> Anyway, I spent my weekend at school.
I draw a picture on hole week because professer set a take to us, have to completly finished a your each pictures.

>> I was busy drawing a picture for the whole week because my professor demands us to finish our work.
But I though its impossible homework for me. But maybe other students will done.

>> It\'s a difficult homework but other students are already done.
By the way Monday\'s illustration workshop class is my favorite lecture.

>> By the way, illustration workshop is my favorite class.
Actually it isn\'t a workshop, its a drawing class like other class.

>> Actually it isn\'t a workshop, it\'s a drawing class like other classes.
But it is best because of nice professer and I like illust.

>> It\'s the best class because my professor is nice and I like illustrating.
I can\'t completly defiened a different thing between fine art and illust yet.

>> I can\'t distinguish fine art and illustrative art yet.
I though illust is more simple than fine art.

>> Illustrative art is simpler than fine arts.
Many fine artist though illustration isn\'t belong to an art, But I couldn\'t agree about their opinion, I don\' think so like them. haha

>> I don\'t think like other artists when it comes to illustrative art.

Here are your corrections:

1. unless

>> CORRECT
2. in case

>> CORRECT
3. in case

>> CORRECT
4. in case

>> CORRECT
5. unless

>> CORRECT
6. unless

>> CORRECT
7. in case

>> CORRECT
8. in case

>> CORRECT
9. in case.

>> CORRECT
10. unless

>> CORRECT

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