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I think there exist a lot of Jean Valjeans of Les Miserables today.
Jean Valjean has been in jail for 19 years for having stolen a loaf of bread for his sister's starving child.
However, I can't agree that these kinds of people are the best ones to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.
Exposing youths to the former prisoners may be a dangerous idea.
Beside this, we can come up with better ways to teach them about crimes.
As Les Miserables means the miserable, we may learn most prisoners must be originally poor and miserable people if we run after what made them committed a crime.
In some respects, our community might have made them a criminal.
We might not have been interested
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Oh who could forget that character, Sir?
I cried, I laughed at I sighed when I saw Les Miserables years ago.
Thank you for everyday wisdom, I know I am your teacher but I also learn a lot from you, Sir!
Thank you for such a wonderful comparison, see you!
I think there exist a lot of Jean Valjeans of Les Miserables today.
>>CORRECT!Jean Valjean has been in jail for 19 years for having stolen a loaf of bread for his sister\'s starving child.
>>CORRECT!However, I can\'t agree that these kinds of people are the best ones to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.
>>CORRECT!Exposing youths to the former prisoners may be a dangerous idea.
>>Exposing youths to former prisoners may be a dangerous idea. Beside this, we can come up with better ways to teach them about crimes.
>>Besides this, we can come up with better ways to teach them about crimes. As Les Miserables means the miserable, we may learn most prisoners must be originally poor and miserable people if we run after what made them committed a crime.
>>CORRECT!In some respects, our community might have made them a criminal.
>>In some respects, our community might have made them criminals.We might not have been interested
>>(Oops let me hear the continuation tomorrow)
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