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This is the continuation of the last homework, Rose!
And today's homework will be talked in the tomorrow's lesson, if possible.
We might not have been interested in their or their parents' poverty and needs.
Nevertheless, criminals could not help but be fairly punished for the safety and stability of our society.
What we are worrying about is whether or not prisoners become good citizens after the imprisonment.
Prisoners have to stay with other criminals for a certain period in jail.
Upon being in jail, he or she is easily infected with the evil ways of the underground criminal world unintentionally.
While in jail, some people could become more vicious than before.
It is true that men with criminal records, even a record, have received cold treatments and severe discrimination from their community.
To make matters worse, this ambience of our society yields another crime.
This is an irony which one of the most unsolvable issues across the world.
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Hi Sir! Thank you for sending the continuation of yesterday\'s homework!
This is the continuation of the last homework, Rose!
>>CORRECT!And today\'s homework will be talked in the tomorrow\'s lesson, if possible.
>> And today\'s homework will be discussed in tomorrow\'s lesson, if possible.
We might not have been interested in their or their parents\' poverty and needs.
>>CORRECT!Nevertheless, criminals could not help but be fairly punished for the safety and stability of our society. >>CORRECT!
What we are worrying about is whether or not prisoners become good citizens after the imprisonment.>>CORRECT!
Prisoners have to stay with other criminals for a certain period in jail.
>>CORRECT!Upon being in jail, he or she is easily infected with the evil ways of the underground criminal world unintentionally.
>>CORRECT!While in jail, some people could become more vicious than before.
>>CORRECT!It is true that men with criminal records, even a record, have received cold treatments and severe discrimination from their community.>>CORRECT!
To make matters worse, this ambience of our society yields another crime.
>>CORRECT! This is an irony which one of the most unsolvable issues across the world.
>>This is an irony which is one of the most unsolvable issues across the world.
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