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Some people who stick to the same job for a long time could enjoy a few advantages.
Their lives continue to be stable, so they could get married and make a family early.
They can catch opportunities to be promoted and they will be able to accumulate expertise related to their work.
Their old aged lives after retiring can also remain stable because of living on a pension.
However, if they become fired in their late 40s or early 50s, they will be so shocked that they might not overcome the crisis of life, because it must be time for them to need a lot of fortune for their children and parents.
Meanwhile, some people who prefer to change their jobs frequently have to live such unstable lives from the beginning.
They can't help but experience small successes and little failures in turn.
However, they become stronger and more skillful through a lot of experiences.
They could run their own companies without retiring for a long time.
They would be ruined as a loser in life forever, if the initial challenges turned frustrated.
We don't know which way is better for us because it belongs to God's providence.
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Some people who stick to the same job for a long time could enjoy a few advantages.
>>CORRECT!
Their lives continue to be stable, so they could get married and make a family early.
Their lives continue to be stable, so they could get married and make a family early.
>>CORRECT!
They can catch opportunities to be promoted and they will be able to accumulate expertise related to their work.
They can catch opportunities to be promoted and they will be able to accumulate expertise related to their work.
>>CORRECT!
Their old aged lives after retiring can also remain stable because of living on a pension.
Their old aged lives after retiring can also remain stable because of living on a pension.
>>CORRECT!
However, if they become fired in their late 40s or early 50s, they will be so shocked that they might not overcome the crisis of life, because it must be time for them to need a lot of
However, if they become fired in their late 40s or early 50s, they will be so shocked that they might not overcome the crisis of life, because it must be time for them to need a lot of
fortune for their children and parents.
>>CORRECT!
Meanwhile, some people who prefer to change their jobs frequently have to live such unstable lives from the beginning.
Meanwhile, some people who prefer to change their jobs frequently have to live such unstable lives from the beginning.
>>CORRECT!
They can\'t help but experience small successes and little failures in turn.
They can\'t help but experience small successes and little failures in turn.
>>CORRECT!
OR>> They can\'t help but experience minor successes and failures in turn.
However, they become stronger and more skillful through a lot of experiences.
However, they become stronger and more skillful through a lot of experiences.
>>CORRECT!
They could run their own companies without retiring for a long time.
They could run their own companies without retiring for a long time.
>>They could run their own companies for a long time without retiring.
They would be ruined as a loser in life forever, if the initial challenges turned frustrated.
>>They would be ruined as a loser in life forever, if the initial challenges turned frustrating.
We don\'t know which way is better for us because it belongs to God\'s providence.
We don\'t know which way is better for us because it belongs to God\'s providence.
>>CORRECT!
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